schorhr's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Command & Conquer TC]

Strange but funny ;-)

I liked it. Enough said!
Schönen Tag noch!

Killerratte responds:

Pfff, hier regnet es.

[Time Shift Drawing]

ok...

If you would include a stop/Pause button and a few hints on drawing, this might get a slightly higher score; And as said previously, more characters, maybee some other stuff (animals, machinery...) and it could be nice.
Anyway, I like your style, hope to see some animations soon :)

drums-tech responds:

Since this was my first flash, I didn't want to go completely overboard with it and risk mucking it up.
But I definately know, now, what to add and improve for the next one :)

[Clayground - Claytime]

Keep it up

Nice, some original ideas, but some flaws, such as lighting and "flickering".
Hope to see more soon ;-)
You dont happen to be in the Klay Klub as well?

BlakTornado responds:

Ive got a little positionable lamp thingy now :) My lighting problems are gone :)
I joined now :)

[The Enchanted Sword 1]

Nice.

I watched this one after your dancing-animation.
Good work!
It was fun to watch the sunlight wandering through the back of the room in quick-motion, looks like you made no break to record this ;-)

ThorKingOfTheVikings responds:

Hey, thanks for yet another review. Since I (yoddtacos) could not review being that this one is under his name. I went under his account because I wanted to reply to you. I believe there was one break but im not 100% sure on that one...

[Dancing 'till dawn!]

Overall great animation!

Hello there,
nice animation, I really liked the smooth way the lego-guy walked, ran on the wall and danced.
Only the green Legoboard would have needed some smoother movement, since it slightly moved in every frame due to the work on the figures. You could use double sided tape underneath or even clay to semi-permanent attach the plate to the table, and you are still able to move it for spins then since its easy to de-attach.
Keep up the good work!
Just too bad that the filesizelimit here on NG either results in shorter Stopmotion movies or worse quality...

yodd responds:

Thanks for the review, double sided tape? Yeah that would work, but glueing it down and ruining a computer desk is more ammusing like what we did. Thanks for the review!

[16-Bit Mercenaries]

Go Roger go!

Your movies get better and better, its really awesome! :-) I would still like to see some voice acting in a sprite movie, just to see how it works out, though giving video-game-characters voice might be wierd... who knows!

Anyway, superb animation, the storyline is good, though it has some long parts, but hey, its an overall 5 out of 5 for me.

:::bY the way, why dont you reply my eMails?
I am not on MSM that often anymore, but on ICQ and Aim, check my site for the numbers/names.

Cya!

RogerGargantua responds:

Heyyy it's Marcus Shaw! Yes, voice acting will be good. I have to find my mic somewhere. I've just mailed u back ! I try to get on ICQ more often now....ciao dude ! I keep ya updated !

[The Killer Dog]

Nice version

Hi, i have watched your buddies version first, and right now it seems like it has a higher score.
To be honest, your art is great, but the dog just walks without bending his legs and hes moving to slow for the distance he is walking... change at least one and its good!
I think the reason why some people like the other one better is that your monsters eat sewerdisposal ;-)
Still, nice work (and also the contest idea)

If you have a contest again i would be happy to join :))

shawcartoon.com

Insiv responds:

Thanks for the tip friend! And about the 'sewerdisposal', I just thought that should be funny...and maybe we`ll have a news contest over a few weaks....

[The Killer Dog (Original)]

Wierd

Wierd.
Just my taste though! ;-)
shawcartoon.com

Rubbertje responds:

Well... if you like weird... you're on the right adress, watching this movie!

[death by exploding snack]

LOL

I liked it... short but funny. I wonder why its only 1,9 so far (score).. some submissions lately with no effort at all made it up to 2,8...?

Keep up your good work....

automatic responds:

Yeah, I'm suprised it's not lower. It is a piece of crap. I made it that way.

Just wait until I finish something good! Gee, won't that be swell?

[Kirby Kirby Kirby]

I love Kirby, and the End with Link ist great!

Well, the Graphics are ok...
the Music is anoying but like the real thing ;-)
I love the ending where Link from Zelda chases them with his sword ;-)

T0MMY responds:

Graphics 'ok' ? You know how much harder and time consuming it is to draw an animation rather than just simply rip the sprites out of the game? I think a less-than-average score of 4 in graphics is a little hard.
But I'm glad to see you enjoyed it.
(Kirby music isn't annoying, says I).

-T0MMY